The article lead section/introduction
I noted that in this edit that you added a section heading to an otherwise OK introduction/lead section. Typically the lead section would not have a header making it appear above the table of contents, and function as a (very) short summary of the article, helping the reader figure out if it was the article he was looking for and grasping the main concepts of the article.
See also Help:Your first article#The lead section.
Apart from that please go on. :-)
PS. In my opinion the wiki is a bit of a mess, tough it is at least getting better over time. A lot of the articles where written before any style guidelines where introduced. Unfortunately a lot of the wiki editors are not aware of them and/or do not care enough.
- That looks good.
Build and run FlightGear on Raspberry Pi 4
I noted that the article is quite long and might benefit from being made into an article series.
I have only skimmed through it very briefly, but i like how it looks otherwise.
This just a suggestion :-)
- Been thinking of this. First I plan to tear out most of the build with a short how to build with D&C.sh. Then have the manual build based on the same file structure as D&C.sh.
- I will need a push on how to split it up. Maybe in a few weeks...