User talk:Cervelo

Easy-GO in Newsletter

Hi,

you're absolutely welcome to introduce your virtual airline in the FlightGear Newsletter. But there are a few remarks that I would like to make:

• Contributions to the newsletter are usually not written in the "I" form. The newsletter is a bit like an encyclopedia, it is merely meant to give a factual update on FlightGear stuff.
• The sentence "since last post" is meaningless. Your first "post" was never published, because the newsletter is not yet published. We will publish the newsletter on November 1.

Please take these remarks into account and try to rewrite/improve your contribution.

Cheers, Gijs 14:17, 24 October 2012 (EDT)